<p>Hey guys, </p>
<p>One of my friends said this was the best essay he has ever read, but I really think he was lying. IMO, this essay needs MAJOR work so if any of you can critique it, then cool. </p>
<p>Non-09ers highly recommended, but anyone unsuspectible of copying is welcome to read it. </p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>I'll read it. I'm a college Junior.</p>
<p>I'd be happy to read it. Send it over.</p>
<p>Took it down to about 650 words, but it needs to be around 550. Bump.</p>
<p>I'll read it</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it!</p>
<p>Sure, I'll be glad to take a look and offer feedback. PM me!
I am an 09er but I have already sent in my Common App, UC, and USC apps, which basically cover all of my schools.</p>
<p>Thanks for your time guys! </p>
<p>BUMP, any other people who can read it by today?</p>
<p>Meh, only one person has given me feedback so far.</p>
<p>Bump, need fast feedback.</p>
<p>Sure, I can read it. (Presuming "Today 2:22" is still TODAY.)
Maybe you can read mine too?</p>