<p>It's quite heavy on vocab according to some other readers, but I can change the vocab. I want some harsh criticism, thanks.</p>
<p>pm it over.</p>
<p>love Chicago essays. PM it over.</p>
<p>id like to see what a chicago essay looks like too</p>
<p>PM me too.</p>
<p>ill read it if you dont mind me applying there too</p>
<p>i will read it and edit for you! I promise to do an incredibly bad job since i'm applying to UChicago too.</p>
<p>/LOL :-P</p>
<p>whee. i will read it. <a href="mailto:tyac.sg@gmail.com">tyac.sg@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>I'm not applying there, but I LOVE their essay prompts! Will read it and give you feedback in a timely manner.</p>
<p>PM me. i'm not applying uchicago.lol</p>