<p>I'm not sure if my essay shows creativity...
can someone read mine??
it would beeee superhelpful</p>
<p>pm me please : )</p>
<p>My first attempt was writing about my experience in filming about a commercial of contraceptives. I was the director and figured out a clever way to promote the product. But later my conselor said write another topic since it did not seem appropriate. Lol. So now there’s less creativity. =/</p>
<p>@MrPropapanda: I would write about it anyway. If it was appropriate enough for a commercial then I’m sure it’s appropriate enough for an essay. Just don’t portray it in an inappropriate way. Unless it really is inappropriate…</p>
<p>I really wouldn’t let your counselor control your essays like that. It’s your application.</p>
<p>I had the most trouble with that essay. I still think mine is really awkward. But I’ll read yours if you want. (I did EA).</p>
<p>pm me it and I’ll read it</p>
<p>pm me and I can give feedback.
'15 hopeful here, no worries</p>
<h1>MrPropapanda: I agree with lidusha. At least, have someone else read it and decide if you should throw your work away.</h1>
<h1>sargun: Good luck :)</h1>
<p>Lidusha petri neongreen Millancad PM’ed.</p>