Critic my commonapp essay

College Essays
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<p>Could anyone read and critic my commonapp essay?
It's just a draft so there are some mistakes.</p>

2

<p>I’d love to.</p>

3

<p>thanks. anyone else?</p>

4

<p>anyoneeE/e/??</p>

5

<p>I don’t mind. PM me.</p>

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<p>pm it to me. I’ll critique it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look if you’d like. ^_^</p>

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<p>I’ll read, pm me please.</p>