Criticism Wanted- 2nd/3rd draft.

[coyn3burglar]

<p>Mine is the Rutgers topic about how I fit into their "melting pot". Any takers?</p>

[misschatterbox]

<p>you can PM me. :]</p>

[coyn3burglar]

<p>bumppp. anyone else wanna read it also please?</p>

[coyn3burglar]

<p>pretty please? =(</p>

[samiamy]

<p>ill read it</p>