<p>I wrote an essay about a sport extracurricular and it feels really... dry. I was hoping someone could critique it for me and give some constructive criticism. Please and thank you. :)</p>
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<p>I wrote an essay about a sport extracurricular and it feels really... dry. I was hoping someone could critique it for me and give some constructive criticism. Please and thank you. :)</p>
<p>pm me if you will thanks.</p>