Criticize my essays- be brutally honest!

PM me if you want to read my essays.

<p>By the way, these two essays are short- approximately 250 words.</p>

<p>what is it about?</p>

<p>One essay is about the most influential person in my life.</p>

<p>Second essay is about the personal experience that inspires awe in me.</p>

<p>I'd be happy to read them, PM away!</p>

<p>If it's any incentive, I got an 800 on the writing section, 12/12 essay. :)</p>

<p>I'd be willing to read then as well.</p>

<p>send me them too and i'll look em over</p>

<p>me too (10 char.)</p>

<p>i'll read 'em. I'm already done with the college admission process (going to UCLA) so I can help you out</p>

<p>go ahead with me too</p>