critique a very personal essay?

<p>The prompt is basically talk about your life. Anyone?</p>

<p>alright 10char</p>

<p>I’ll read and critique, if you PM me.</p>

<p>Sure I’ll give it a shot. PM me.</p>

<p>-raises hand- :D</p>

<p>Hello there,
Yeah…I would love to read over it and critique and tell you what I think of it.
Send it to me through PM.
Thanks.</p>