Critique and Destroy my UC Essay!

<p>I would appreciate anyone who would want to take the time to critique my UC essay and offer sound advice. I will be trusting the reader or readers. Thanks!</p>

<p>[ P.S. - If you would like to tell me your credentials, that won't be necessary, although I won't be opposed to it either since it would be nice knowing who is reading the most important thing in my life right now. ]</p>

<p>Sure thing, PM me.</p>

<p>PM me if you like. You can trust me, I recently finished my UC essays.</p>

<p>Bump!
I’m in need of some assistance! I’ve fallen and I can’t get up!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look; I’m already in college, so I won’t steal your essay.</p>

<p>PM sent.
:)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to read them and give my honest feedback. I’m a senior in high school. This means very little, but I got a 5 on the AP Lang exam last year. I’ve already written my own essays, so you don’t need to worry about essay theft. Just pm me, if you’d like my help.</p>

<p>I’m about to send in my essay. Can someone help me with it one last time? I’d appreciate it if you left your email address.</p>