Critique essay please (uchicago)

<p>Hi I really want to get into University of Chicago.
I already started on a rough draft of my supplement essay and i need someone to tell me if its good enough because if not ill just go in another direction in terms of content.</p>

<p>Please PM me if you are willing to critique my essay so i can send it to you! No PLAGIARISM please x Let me know if you are already a college student/graduate.</p>

<p>I’m curious to read it, and will critique (and not plagiarize.)</p>

<p>Thanks! okay i will private message you</p>

<p>Anyone else want to help me please? I need as much opinions as possible x</p>

<p>I will do the same as clienk!</p>

<p>I’m not applying to UChicago, so I’d be happy to read it.</p>

<p>@clienk @joebloggstroll @sgtdonut
I PMed it already, check your inbox and reply as soon as you can with your honest opinions thanks!</p>

<p>i’ll give it a read elle if you would like an opinion from down under?</p>

<p>Hey Elle, I’ll be entering UChicago this September as a first-year so I’ll be happy to read yours and give you some advice :)</p>

<p>I’m a current sophmore, so sure, I’ll edit it for you</p>

<p>Ill take a read</p>

<p>I’ll read it! Uchicago is not a school I’m applying to so ^no conflict of interest lol.</p>

<p>I’ll take a look at it for you too if you’d like.</p>

<p>I’d love to read it! Its not on my list so definitely no plagerism</p>

<p>I’d love to help! No plagiarism, I swear! PM me.</p>