critique - essay!

<p>please if someone can read/edit my college essay and tell me if i can get into</p>

<p>drexel
jmu
penn state
uconn</p>

<p>with a 2.8 gpa?</p>

<p>i know 2.8 is too low for those college but thats y i need some serious remarks on my essay!!!!</p>

<p>pm if you can help me (:</p>

<p>I am not an active member on this board but i think i can help you :slight_smile: (I help other people on essayforum.com though)</p>