Critique final drafts of 2 short responses?

College Essays
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<p>Anyone have some time to read my 2 short responses and give me some feedback before I send them in?</p>

<p>Critiques much appreciated. :D</p>

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<p>sure, go ahead and PM them if you want :slight_smile:
im not exactly supergood, but im sure a bit of opinion wouldnt hurt :)</p>

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<p>bummmmmmpppp</p>

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<p>Bump, Deadline is 1st of Jan so I really need some feedback. I’m also willing to swap critiques.</p>

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<p>roxlo did u send me ur short answers? sry if i havent gotten to them. i can read yours if you read mine :D</p>

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<p>Sent .</p>

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<p>I have time</p>

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<p>Send it over!!</p>

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<p>Sent .</p>