<p>hello : ) would anyone who has finished the college admissions process critique the beginning of my common app essay .... its only a couple of sentences but i want to know how it is so far</p>
<p>Sure, PM it over. :]</p>
<p>College freshman!</p>
<p>send a PM and expect greatness in return. greatness or else reasonable feedback that will hopefully help you improve your essay...it's a toss-up.</p>