Critique for 2 UT Essays

<p>Hi, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to read over and critique two essays I wrote for the required A and B topics for University of Texas - Austin. </p>

<p>First one being a person who has influenced you and the second being an issue of importance to you. </p>

<p>PM or post here if you would like to.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

<p>Sure I’d love to. Do you want like a Word doc or a Google doc or something?</p>

<p>Yeah I just joined, ha. </p>

<p>I emailed you a Word doc, you can reply to that email with your essay.</p>

<p>Hi, I was wondering for UT, there are 4 topic essays (A-D). So A and B are required, C is optional for some scholarships, but D says: </p>

<p>"The essay in this section is specific to certain college majors and is not required by all colleges/universities that accept ApplyTexas applications. If you are not applying for a major in Architecture, Art, Art History, Design, Studio Art, Visual Art Studies/Art Education you are not required to write this essay.</p>

<p>Personal interaction with objects, images and spaces can be so powerful as to change the way one thinks about particular issues or topics. For your intended area of study (architecture, art history, design, studio art, visual art studies/art education), describe an experience where instruction in that area or your personal interaction with an object, image or space effected this type of change in your thinking. What did you do to act upon your new thinking and what have you done to prepare yourself for further study in this area?"</p>

<p>Does this include if I am going for radio/television/film?</p>