Critique my admissions essay!

College Essays
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<p>I would like to complete this process by tonight! I need help in editing my admissions essay. Can anyone help ASAP?</p>

2

<p>OK. I can try to help.</p>

3

<p>Thanks! I sent it to your email!</p>

4

<p>I think i can help.</p>

5

<p>Send it to me if you want. :)</p>

6

<p>Wait, when is your application due? And for which institution?</p>

7

<p>Message me!</p>

8

<p>For what institution, I agree</p>

9

<p>I can help! PM it to me</p>