Critique my common app essay???

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I just finished my rough draft and need some criticism.
I can PM it to you.</p>

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<p>PM it to me. I’ll read!</p>

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<p>Send a PM. I will look at it.</p>

<p>S</p>

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<p>pm it and i’ll try and help you out!</p>

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<p>PM me! I’ll help!</p>

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<p>Just a suggestion: Ask your AP Lit/Language and Comp teacher if you can.</p>

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<p>PM it over. I’d love to help out.</p>

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<p>PM it over I did a lot of these already :)</p>

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<p>Sure, i’m wondering what others are writing. PM me as well please</p>

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<p>ill love to read it and give u some notes on it! send it over</p>

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<p>I love editing papers!! (yeah… I’m one of those weird people)</p>

<p>Just for clarity, I am a senior who will be applying to colleges this fall/winter, so feel free to decline my offer! I already have my common app essay complete though…it that eases your mind.</p>

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<p>Send it over! I’ll love to provide some feedback.</p>