Critique my Common App essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys!</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone would be willing to take a few minutes out of their day to read my Common App essay and give me a few critiques? I'd prefer if you've had some experience reading some essays and giving feedback before. It's still in it's first drafts and I'm looking to start polishing it up! I'll be using it to send to some Ivy Leagues!</p>

<p>I'd greatly appreciate y'alls help! :)</p>

<p>PS: It's about my coming out experience, so if that offends you, you probably don't want to read it!</p>

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<p>private message me with the essay. will you read my essay, as well?</p>

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<p>Sure! I’ll send it over, and I’d be willing to give some feedback on yours as well.</p>

<p>If anyone else was willing to look at mine too, that’d be great!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. I’d like mine critiqued too!</p>

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<p>i’d love to read it! that topic’s awesome, btw.</p>

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<p>Alright, I’ll send em right over to you guys! Thanks so much :)</p>

<p>Always looking for advice from more people!</p>

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<p>I love how forums such as these exist! And I’d love to read your essay :)</p>

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<p>I can read and critique if you’d like :slight_smile: PM it over!</p>

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<p>Thanks guys :slight_smile: I’m always looking for more viewpoints, if anyone’s interested let me know!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. Send it over.</p>

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<p>ill read it, send me it! :)</p>

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<p>I would love to read it. PM me!</p>