<p>Hey, I am a very pessimistic person and I can't love anything that I make, so I BADLY need someone to critique my common app essay. I need to know if it is interesting, how to make it more interesting and if there are any problems with it's structure/ flow of content/ etc. I thank any one who is kind enough to give me a proper criticism :).</p>
<p>send it to me</p>
<p>sure PM me, ill give you some feedback. Also tell me what the prompt is.</p>