<p>I wrote the essay in an afternoon for National Merit and I'd like to know if it's salvageable to make into my Common App Essay, or if I should just scrap the idea and write a completely different essay. PM me and I'll send it to you. Thank you :)</p>
<p>I’d be willing to read it</p>
<p>Thank you very much everyone who read and commented on my essay, it’s very much appreciated. Whoever else would be willing to critique/proofread my essay, I can PM it to you.</p>