Critique my Common App essay?

<p>Hey, everyone. I'm stressin' out here. Can anyone read my essay and give me some feedback? Thank you.</p>

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<p>Please???</p>

<p>Sure thing; send it over if you’re still looking for help.</p>

<p>I’m willing. Send it along with your prompt plz</p>

<p>bump, anyone who’s not still in HS?</p>

<p>I will be happy to review it.</p>