<p>I'm trying to get into top school. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Not too sound like a jerk but I'm extremely paranoid. I'd rather someone already in college or out of college to critique my essay.</p>
<p>I'm trying to get into top school. Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Not too sound like a jerk but I'm extremely paranoid. I'd rather someone already in college or out of college to critique my essay.</p>