Critique my common app essay?

College Essays
1

<p>Anyone willing to give it a go?</p>

2

<p>I'm willing, pm it to me if you'd like.</p>

3

<p>I'm willing to critique it, if you don't mind another '09er. =]</p>

4

<p>same as imaginarywhale.</p>

5

<p>Same as imaginarywhale and hamsi2004. :)</p>

6

<p>sent !</p>

7

<p>PM it to me and I'll give it a look and send you some feedback as well!</p>

8

<p>Pm me , I like finding errors :) especially spelling and grammatical</p>

9

<p>If you want another reader, go ahead and PM me!</p>

10

<p>Thank you! If anyone is familiar with the type of essays U Chicago looks for in their supplement, say hi in my other thread =)</p>

11

<p>ill critique pm it over</p>

12

<p>i'll give it a look as well.</p>

13

<p>i can do a really comprehensive, analytical edit of your essay. pm me. :)</p>