critique my common app essay?

<p>Hi, I just finished the main common app essay, but I'm feeling a bit uncertain about it. Would any one of you like to take a look at it and give me some feedback? Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll give you some feedback! Just PM it to me.</p>

<p>PM me ill respond</p>

<p>PM I’LL respond as well.</p>

<p>sure, PM it to me</p>