Critique my Common App essay?

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>I selected topic #1:</p>

<p>Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.</p>

<p>The topic that I chose to write about as a personal experience is, admittedly, a pretty bizarre one. I finished the essay a few days ago, after working on it for about a week, and I would really like to get some opinions on it. Thank you :)</p>

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<p>I’d like to read it and offer a humble opinion. Send it to me.</p>

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<p>I’m willing to offer my two cents on your essay. PM it please.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>What are the common app questions? I thought it didn’t come out till aug 1</p>

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<p>They are the same this year as last year.</p>

<p>I’d love to have a read as well.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. How do I give you my e-mail?</p>

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<p>I’ll read it. Just PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. PM it to me!</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to read it, and give you my perspective.</p>

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<p>I’d love to take a look. PM me, and I’ll give you my opinion!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me.</p>

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<p>I’ll read the thing.</p>

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<p>can someone do the same for my essay? i’m applying early decision and need help.</p>

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<p>I’l read it too.</p>

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<p>anyone want to read mine too? it doesnt have an ending yet but im not too confident and i just want to see if i should completely scrap it and use a new topic.</p>

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<p>Send 'em at me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it (to all those who asked to have their essays read).</p>