Critique my common app essay

College Essays
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<p>Would love some help with it. I feel like its either hate it or love it. I personally really like it but that isn't saying much since I'm not the best of writers. My guidance counselor is telling us between 250 and 500 words, but mine is 696 >_< I cant think of any ways to trim it down</p>

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<p>696 is fine. ill read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too :slight_smile: PM it over</p>

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<p>i’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>I don’t mind reading it! x)</p>

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<p>I’d kinda like to read it! :)</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>Send it on over</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’'l take a look if you don’t mind…</p>

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<p>love it or hate it? sounds interesting… </p>

<p>i’ll read!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>i will read</p>

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<p>i’ll gladly read it and critique.</p>

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<p>All but 4 of the users who’ve asked to read your essay have fewer than 50 posts, and four of the same have fewer than 20 posts. Be cautious when you send your essay.</p>

<p>EDIT: oh look <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/255610-posting-essays-other-sensitive-information.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/college-essays/255610-posting-essays-other-sensitive-information.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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<p>if you still need someone, I’ll read. pm me</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>