Critique my Common App Transfer Essay

College Essays
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<p>I love to get some feedback and critique on my 'why' transfer essay portion of the common app. I would especially appreciate comment on diction, as well as whether or not the essay includes enough substance as to what exactly makes me want to transfer.</p>

<p>Apparently I dont have enough posts yet to send a pm, so send me one or post your email here and I'll send you an email with the essay.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>Hello again. While I realize my OP was less than 12 hours ago, I am curious as to why my thread has received so many views and yet no replies? Have a committed some sort of faux pas? Or was that this post? haha</p>

<p>My sentiment is rooted in urgency, as the Common App deadline for my #1 school is in a mere 8 days.</p>