Critique my commonapp essay PLEASE

<p>I have early deadlines and i really need someone to read my essay and critique it. Thanks so much!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look and give you my two cents =). PM me.</p>

<p>willll do :-)</p>

<p>i will :slight_smile: just pm it to me.</p>

<p>No problem i’ll help as much as i can from my limited knowledge… thanks .pm me .</p>