Critique my CommonApp Essay?

College Essays
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<p>Hey, I was just finished the rough draft of my CommonApp essay and was hoping someone would be willing to check it over and see if I'm taking it in the right direction or if I need to check anything. Just let me know and I'll PM you the essay. Thanks a lot in advance!</p>

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<p>sure. PM me.</p>

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<p>sure send it</p>

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<p>I’d love to give you some feedback. Shoot me a PM.</p>

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<p>I’ll help! PM me.</p>

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<p>ill read it over. PM me</p>

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<p>I can help! PM me.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it!</p>

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<p>Ill read it!</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it! Send it over :)</p>

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<p>I’d be happy to take a look and provide some feedback. PM me.</p>

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<p>I would be happy to take a look. I have a B.A. from Stanford and a J.D. from Harvard. Since joining CC, I have provided essay comments on 43 drafts for 23 students. If you would like to get started, PM me!
JP</p>

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<p>I’ll give you my opinion :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and provide feedback. Just PM it to me! :)</p>

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<p>Yea! PM meee=)</p>

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<p>Sure, pm me.</p>

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<p>Yeah! :slight_smile: PM me?</p>

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<p>Please pm me too. I will read. Thanks</p>

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<p>Yeah, I’ll read it. PM me!</p>

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<p>PM me too.</p>