<p>Well yeah...who wants to read it and give me feedback? I think it's alright in the beginning but gets worse as it goes on :/. I guess I'll see what you guys have to say.</p>
<p>PM me if you would like to read it
No '14ers please</p>
<p>ok you could pm it but e-mailing it would be more beneficial
<a href="mailto:imn3ilhuru@aim.com">imn3ilhuru@aim.com</a></p>
<p>^Only one response so far? Well, I would love to read it for you if you want, but I’m a 14er:)</p>
<p>same as xrCalico23, i’m a 14er. But i’d be glad to help if you wanted it. No worries though, i’ve already got my topics:)</p>
<p>you can send it to me, if you like.</p>
<p>pm me
ill read it</p>
<p>Shoot it, if you still need reviews</p>