critique my essay? have a week left!

College Essays
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<p>applying SUNYs and my school wants everything by Nov. 16th</p>

<p>if you would like to help, ill PM it over in exchange for critiquing yours this way i know you're not just trying to rip me off! So if you wanna help out, PM urs over and ill PM u mine! THANKS IF YOU HELP IN ADVANCE!</p>

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<p>PM me. copy your essay into the message.</p>

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<p>Make sure you give me a copy too, people say I critique well.
You see for yourself :]</p>