critique my essay please :(

<p>anyone willing to read my essay? i would appreaciate . u dont have to say much just the idea. thank you</p>

<p>As long as you aren't applying to Princeton ED with the Princeton app (which would create an unfair conflict of interest, I think) I'll be glad to read it.</p>

<p>Send it to me. How harsh do you want me to be? heh I don't want to sound like an arrogant jerk.</p>