Critique My Essay Please!

<p>Hi, I was hoping someone would be interested in reading my essay. This will be submitted to the Common App, which all of the colleges I'm applying to accept. I'm willing to accept all forms of critique and revisions (just be nice please!). Also, I am lost on a title.
Thank you.</p>

<p>I’ll read it. PM it to me.</p>

<p>pm if you will thanks.</p>

<p>I’ll read it! Just PM it —i get busy tomorrow so either expect a response today or in two days!</p>