Critique my essay pleasee : ] ?

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys, so I'm in Junior Year right now and my AP Lang teacher assigned us to write our rough draft for our college essay. But he was absent today so I was wondering if any of you guys are willingly to read my essay ???</p>

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<p>I can read it.</p>

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<p>Thank you ^ :slight_smile:
Any body else? It would mean alot …</p>

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<p>I’ll read it :slight_smile:
PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I think I sent it to you guys o.O
If not, then just tell me</p>

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<p>ill read it :)</p>

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<p>I am read it for you as well.</p>

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<p>Here, I’ll give it a look ;)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’d love to read it, just PM it to me!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, PM me!</p>

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<p>Huh, my AP Lang teacher also assigned a similar assignment. I can read it, but you don’t have to send it to me. But if you do, can you critique my essay?</p>

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<p>Hey, yangmaster I’ll read your essay if pm it to me</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>i’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too.</p>