<p>Like the title says, I'll critique your essay if you take a look at mine (it's really short, about 370 words). I'm applying to ILR Cornell.</p>
<p>Post here and pm me if interested. I'll accept the first five people.</p>
<p>I'll take a look. You PM me yours and I'll PM you mine =)</p>
<p>Hey can I get in on this too? Mine is only 308 words. This is directed to either of you, btw haha.</p>
<p>sry for not replying to you guys yesterday. college confidential crashed on me :(
if you guys still need any editting just post here</p>
<p>Mine is only 282 words. I'll edit yours too because I've already submitted my app to Cornell. </p>
<p>PM me...Wait you're online...Go ahead and send it over. Thanks!</p>