<p>I wrote 2 versions for my essay prompt. Anyone has time to critique them and tell me which version is better and what to improve？It would be great if you can get back to me in 3 days, because I want to apply early. Please don't reply if you are still applying or hasn't applied. College students teachers are all fine. Thank you in advance.</p>
<p>I found someone one to read my essays. Thanks for your interests!!</p>