Critique my essay!

Applying to College
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<p>I wrote two essays and i would really appreciate it if u took the time to help with them. I got critiques from some people but i am anxious to know what u think. Post here and I will PM it to u ASAP. Thanks i really appreciate it</p>

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<p>Ill take a look</p>

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<p>send it to me</p>

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<p>sent to both of u</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>sent ...............</p>

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<p>send it to me too</p>

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<p>i ll read it,</p>

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<p>i'll read it!</p>

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<p>Id be happy to look it over</p>

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<p>i can read it</p>

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<p>ill take a look</p>

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<p>i'd like to read and comment!</p>

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<p>I'll comment, too!</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to take a look</p>

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<p>i'd be happy to</p>

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<p>I'll read it...send it over</p>