<p>Post your email address. Thanks. :)</p>
<p>h88 @ hall88 . com</p>
<p>I'd love to critique yours. You might also want to PM me instead.</p>
<p>Ahh I changed my mind, I'm going to revise it first. Expect an email in a week. :)</p>
<p><a href="mailto:cresaitch@yahoo.com....wont">cresaitch@yahoo.com....wont</a> mind... waitng for a week... ;)
cant get hold of big books...cos i love reading articles and essays...</p>
<p>sent (10 char limit)</p>
<p><a href="mailto:pink_heaven012@yahoo.com">pink_heaven012@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>Got it :)
Will reply soon!</p>
<p><a href="mailto:cauchyineq@yahoo.com">cauchyineq@yahoo.com</a></p>
<p>yay for some winter reading.</p>
<p>Will give you a detailed reply soon...but currently what i see is a lck of connection between your dreams and your community/experience...and between it what is the role/place of mIT....
just adding a sentence or so at the end of each paragraph and modifying a the last paragraph can change it dramatically....bring the spark of MIT in your Essay....i hope i will reply within a day :)</p>
<p>Your points are all right...just the link is missing....Good Luck!</p>