Critique my essay?

<p>I would appreciate it if you would be willing to comment on my essay. I selected the topic, "Tell us the story of a street, path, road--real or imaginary or metaphorical."</p>

<p>i'll critique it. you know that i'm applying right now, also, but it's only fair since you offered to read mine. however, i understand if you don't want to send it to me.</p>

<p>me too. PM me :)</p>

<p>im c/o 2012. ill critique if youd like.</p>

<p>May I ask why you're writing this so early in the year?
Just wondering.</p>

<p>So I won't have to go crazy the start of senior year haha.</p>

<p>ill read it 10char</p>

<p>Fair enough. I won't deny I started thinking about the essays once I read that they had been posted. But writing them is a whole different story. Also, I predict that most of what I will end up writing about will occur between now and November.</p>

<p>i'm bored, i'll do it.</p>

<p>yes, we'll all do it since we would love to read others essays to keep ours sharp. haha just joking. im afraid to even share mine since everyone here seems to be so talented...</p>