Critique my essay?

<p>If anyone could please read my essay I would greatly appreciate it... I'm debating writing a new one because I'm not sure how I feel about this one - I wrote it a while ago, but I think re-reading it over and over again has skewed my opinion of it. Thanks in advance!</p>

<p>hey i would like to read it, u can PM it to me if you want :D</p>

<p>Thanks PM'd it. Anyone else?</p>

<p>pm me man. I love grammar.</p>

<p>sure send it to me! PM it here</p>