Critique my MIT essays please?

<p>I just finished my creativity and challenge essays for MIT; would anyone care to take a look and critique them? I'm especially not sure if my choice of topic for the creativity one is appropriate. </p>

<p>I'm applying early action. I'll have the surroundings one done later this week (hopefully) and I can send that one then. </p>

<p>Pm me (preferably) or post here if you're willing to help. I do reserve the right not to send.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>Bump.</p>

<p>10chars</p>

<p>I can help you out (I’m a senior though as well). PM me.</p>

<p>I will critique yours if you do mine? I have the 12b) and12c) essays ready for others to check out!</p>

<p>Email me</p>

<p><a href="mailto:anjianwoo@yahoo.com">anjianwoo@yahoo.com</a></p>

<p>Get me at <a href="mailto:chatmar2@aol.com">chatmar2@aol.com</a></p>

<p>I’m also a senior applying EA to MIT. I’ll have all of mine done in a few days, and then I can send them your way. </p>

<p>I’m glad to edit yours, if you’re okay with the whole senior applying to same school thing…</p>

<p>I’m a junior and I’d be more than happy to comment… PM it overrr!</p>

<p>I’ll read it, PM me</p>

<p>Sorry guys but I’m not sending this to any other seniors applying to MIT.

  1. I don’t trust you to comment honestly on my essays.
  2. I don’t trust myself to comment honestly on your essays.</p>

<p>All of them are done now except for the 100w activity one.</p>

<p>I’ll read your essays! I’m a senior, but I’m definitely not applying to MIT.</p>

<p><a href="mailto:xserendipityx@gmail.com">xserendipityx@gmail.com</a> :)</p>

<p>PM me if you like</p>

<p>Bump. Everything done now.</p>

<p>PM me. I’d be happy to critique them.</p>