Critique my "most influential teacher" essay please!?

<p>Talking about my math team coach and basketball coach and how he merged the two subjects together! Critique please?</p>

<p>I can take a look tomorrow if you would like.</p>

<p>okay thanks</p>

<p>I am happy to read if you don’t mind a 14’er.</p>

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