Critique my personal statement for Brown?

College Essays
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<p>I'm applying for Brown ED (due Nov 1), so anyone that has time to help me with this soon will be greatly appreciated.</p>

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<p>I am applying RD to brown but if you like I would love to read it</p>

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<p>I would love to</p>

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<p>I’m a junior at UPenn, I’ll read it for you if you like… send it over</p>

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<p>i would love to read it</p>

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<p>Would love to read it and help out. Brown is a unique school which looks for unique essays so anything I can do to aid the process.</p>

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<p>I’ll give you feedback. PM!</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to read and edit your essay. I’m not applying to Brown if you’re wondering. Just send me a PM.</p>

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<p>PM it over and I’ll give feedback</p>

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<p>i’d like to read it</p>

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<p>PM me and i’ll give feedback!</p>