<p>Can someone please critique my poem? I'll PM it to you. Thanks :)</p>
<p>I could; I’d appreciate the chance to take a break from cramming to review something.</p>
<p>You should check out [Young</a> Writers Society • Home](<a href=“http://www.youngwriterssociety.com%5DYoung”>http://www.youngwriterssociety.com), where you can post your work and get critiques from other young writers all over the world. 
Shameless plug, I know, but it’s a really cool website.</p>