critique my portfolio!

College Majors Visual Arts and Film Majors
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<p>I'm currently working on the application process to MICA - Maryland Institute College of Art. I've been nominated for the ArtStar Prize and also need more scholarships to actually attend ( the money is a major problem ). I'm currently working on my portfolio ( therefore i only have about half the amount needed ). I have several other pieces finished to include, but have yet to take pictures and such, so I'd just like a small critique on what I have so far? Thank you!</p>

<p>I'd love to know what else I can include, what I can do to improve it, etc. I have an interior piece I'm working on and a still life, as well. I'm still not sure about the two bird pieces, but I have more of them.</p>

<p><a href="http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...psb7935f02.jpg%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...psb7935f02.jpg&lt;/a> ( piece one )
<a href="http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps470fc364.jpg%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps470fc364.jpg&lt;/a> ( piece two )
<a href="http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps000e6e74.jpg%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps000e6e74.jpg&lt;/a> ( piece three )
<a href="http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...psffce7400.jpg%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...psffce7400.jpg&lt;/a> ( piece four )
<a href="http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps95103b90.jpg%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps95103b90.jpg&lt;/a> ( piece five )
<a href="http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps0e7af951.jpg%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://i1054.photobucket.com/albums/...ps0e7af951.jpg&lt;/a> ( piece six ( bad picture ) )</p>

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<p>Quickly, I realized that the links aren’t going through. Here they are:</p>

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