critique my Statement of Purpose , Personal Statement (for most) for engineering pls.

College Essays
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<p>I'm writing a Statement of Purpose for Texas A&M Engineering. Mostly seen it called Personal Statement on the forum. My GPA isn't splendid so I need the essay to have minor errors.</p>

<p>Please help me out, I'm not a strong writer nor was was I born here.</p>

<p>I usually have trouble
1. with the tense; -ed -d words
2. has, had, and have.</p>

<p>I don't think I talk enough about goals, let me know what more I can add or correct thanks; PM me.</p>

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<p>I can help if you don’t mind that I am also just a student!</p>

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<p>Think I sent it, not sure if it works though its my first time. Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>I didn’t get it :frowning:
Do you want to just email it to me?</p>

<p>californiaxclass@hotmail</p>

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<p>never mind got it!</p>

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<p>bumpppppppppppppp***</p>

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<p>Sorry have to rebump, but it been over 6 hours with 0 help… </p>

<p>Anyone?? I need to submit by Jan. 1st 2013.</p>

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<p>Need couple more opinions… before submitting. Can help read yours also. Thanks</p>

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<p>Last and final bump. PM me so i can send, thanks.</p>

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<p>guess I was wrong…still bumping … PM me email if you can help edit thanks.</p>

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<p>I’ll help. PM</p>