Critique my super personal essay? Comments welcomed :)

<p>I wrote my common app essay on how after graduation I moved to Colombia to live in the mountains with my uncle. It might be different than most essays, so if you want to take a gander post here and I will pm you it. Thanks!</p>

<p>send it over if you like</p>

<p>sounds interesting - happy to look at it</p>

<p>I’d love to take a look at it and give my 2 cents</p>

<p>Sending now, sorry rushing to finish supps all day!</p>

<p>Let me know if you guys got them. I don’t know why they are not showing up on my sent outbox.</p>