Critique my supplement... please?

<p>:) pretty please?</p>

<p>Isn’t the app due already? Lolll</p>

<p>You can PM me if you’d like. I’d be happy to read it.</p>

<p>It’s due today at 11:59 PM!</p>

<p>I’ll read it, kiterunner! :)</p>

<p>Alright - I’ll PM you guys in a bit, putting final touches on it now :)</p>

<p>Ahhh darn it! So you’re saying I could have had an extra 24 hours?!</p>

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<p>HAHA. Send it over if you’d like an extra pair of eyes to read it. I’ve already submitted (Clearly, haha).</p>