Critique My Transfer Essay?

<p>Short version: CC student who graduated with 1.9GPA in high school and now pulling a 3.6 in college two years later. Writing a transfer essay about the tribulations I went through to while writing the transfer essay.</p>

<p>If you reply, I'll PM the full essay to you.</p>

<p>You can PM it to me. Please include your email address in case I need to make comments using Word Tools.</p>

<p>Turned in my apps last week so I’m still in the mindset if you’d like some help, just pm it.</p>

<p>I’d be willing to help with some generalities.</p>

<p>sure, PM me!</p>

<p>it sounds very interesting , pm me</p>

<p>ill take a look</p>