<p>I'd appreciate some constructive criticism before I turn in my UC essay. I'll PM you the essay. Prompt was - Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?"</p>
<p>I’ll read it! But you can’t PM so email me at laurelarroyo @ yahoo . com</p>