<p>I need a few people to critique my UC essay. I am applying as a business major. </p>
<p>Right now it's 1097 words so I need some help cutting it down and improving grammar.</p>
<p>Please post in this thread if you are willing to read and provide feedback</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
<p>ill be glad to rip your essay to shreds… ( a good thing 
)</p>
<p>ill help…</p>
<p>ill take a look</p>
<p>still looking for more people to read</p>
<p>Sure, I would be glad to help. I already went through the college application process a year ago. PM your essay to me and I will give you some feedback! :)</p>
<p>PM me I will be glad to give a feedback.</p>
<p>I am good at trimming out the fats. Just PM me.</p>
<p>I’m willing to read them. PM me!</p>
<p>I can take a look at it and to tear it down a bit Pm me.</p>
<p>pm it to meeeeee!:))</p>
<p>You can PM me if you want.</p>
<p>I’m willing to give it a read… pm it</p>
<p>I will give you some feedback. :)</p>
<p>i want to help
i’m from Chicago if that helps
…and i’m also staying as far away from UC as possible</p>
<p>Haha awesome ok sure I will read it for you. 1097 is a lot of words. Atleast cut it down to 1012.</p>